I Like The Snow Everywhere But Inside My Coat

Trees are beautiful
covered in snow and ice.
I’m, however, not.

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  1. Ann Avatar
    Ann

    I’m, however, not.

    1. burgoynealexburgoyne Avatar
      burgoynealexburgoyne

      I knew that that comma should be there, however, I chose not to put it in because it looked funny. Poetry, man!

  2. Ann Avatar
    Ann

    well then

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