Pacing Yourself is Imperative, Difficult

Some things are drawn out:
death and likely other ends.
Trying to slow down.

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  1. Michael Burgoyne Avatar
    Michael Burgoyne

    You’re using titles
    To help extend your Haikus
    Please cease and desist

    1. burgoynealexburgoyne Avatar
      burgoynealexburgoyne

      You’re using esses
      to pluralize “haiku”, Pa.
      Cease, desist yo’-self.

  2. Drew Avatar
    Drew

    Drawn out, indeed. We spend every day of our lives working toward it, however unwillingly or unwittingly.

  3. burgoynealexburgoyne Avatar
    burgoynealexburgoyne

    Truth. Hard to reel in the benefits of life when you work so hard to move through it. Sometimes I feel like I’m creating a molasses pit for myself to walk through.

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